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Broken hopes have roped them in
Cravings spoken by their sins
Savings spent to dust again
Actions fueled by greed

Soaking tongues salvate and savor
Rocket highs and potent flavors
Trading pockets, friends and favors
Taste buds start to bleed

Neighbors who trusted each other
Backstab and sell out their brother
Just to taste that devil butter
A sea full of misdeeds

Shaking in anticipation
Can't escape the situation
Hooked in by their desperation
Your system wants to feed

Addiction cracks the sanest mind
Polluting thoughts from the inside
Corrupted souls commit the crime
You can't deny the need
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:iconkittiasher:
The last line was really powerful. "Addiction" can be treated, but "needs" unmet, cannot be denied. Sucks, really.
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=Tory-Steller Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the feedback Kitti! :D
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:iconkittiasher:
Always my pleasure, dearie.
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Mood: Love ~Valkaneer Sep 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Well done.
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=Tory-Steller Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Mood: Joy ~cskadoz Sep 22, 2012   General Artist
way cool vision-tone-rhyme pattern!
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=Tory-Steller Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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